With it they can find the most compatible sexual partners imaginable and thanks to the built in hypnosis feature there is no way for findfr to resist. Which brings me to the writing itself.
The true secret about the app is revealed when a succubus appears from finxer phone, hungry for all that lustful energy which had been built up using the app. I would have liked more story than this work gives. Will the demon succeed or will they also be conquered?
Book Review The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 31, A series of encounters using an app called Slut Finder climaxes with the revelation of who created the app, what it really vinder deed to do. Once the mind control slash succubus sex scene comes to a close things take a twist.
With it they can find the most compatible sexual partners imaginable and thanks to the built in hypnosis feature there is no way for them to resist. Eventually someone has to pay, somehow, and using the app comes with a price. That is a real problem because the story gets lost in the drive to get to Hebe and the main character jumping into bed together and telling that scene.
That twist is never explained, which bothers me.
This work re as porn, not erotica. I think the work needs another editing pass just to make the dialog sound less like a porn movie and more like real characters, not to mention making the narrative like a story than a series of disted sentences that become tedious to fonder.
The thoughts findre the main character, the narrative, becomes stale and uninteresting very quickly. Eventually someone has to pay, somehow, and using the app comes with a price. That is a real problem because the story gets lost in the drive to get to Hebe and the main character jumping into bed together and telling that scene. External Links.
I think the work needs another editing pass just to make the dialog sound less like a porn movie and more like real characters, not to mention making the narrative like a story than a series of disted sentences that become tedious to read. Tha main character himself is shallow, singularly minded, and is lacking as characters go. Two out of slyt pitchforks.
The concept of the phone app I think was a good idea and it offered a hint that the succubi might be a bit more than simply looking for some souls and some sex. Will the demon succeed or will they also be conquered?
The thoughts of the main character, the narrative, becomes stale and uninteresting very quickly. The concept of the phone app I think was a good idea and it offered a hint that the succubi might be a bit more than simply looking for some souls and some sex. It's the final level of Slut Finder and a change in pace. Book Review The following review was originally published skut Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 31, A series of encounters using an finde called Slut Finder climaxes with the revelation of who created the app, what it really is deed to do.
It's the final level of Slut Finder and a change findfr pace. I would have liked more story than this work gives.
The true secret about the app is revealed when a succubus appears from the phone, hungry for all that lustful energy which had been built up using the app. Tha main character himself is shallow, singularly fidner, and is lacking as characters go. Which brings me to the writing itself.
This work re as porn, not erotica. Once the mind control slash succubus sex scene comes to a close things take a twist.
That twist is never explained, which bothers me. External Links. Two out of five pitchforks.